Friday, April 10, 2009

WORK IN PROGRESS

Hey there! Just wanna see what you all think about this tonal in progress! Is there anything that needs to change or be address ?any tips ideas? Thanks a bunch!
Version#1
Version#2 Any Suggestions? Our issues that need to be addressed? Thanks!

5 comments:

Lauren Gallegos said...

Just two things 1. The little dark thing in the bottom right is throwing me off. I'm assuming it's a bush?...So maybe add more or take it off? And 2. Maybe alittle more variation in the cloud formations. I really like it though! :) Great tonal work! I want to see the final image!

Carrie Liao said...

I agree about the clouds (though it's not a huge deal, it will be panning up) and the darkness of the bush drawing the eye. Is this photoshop? yuuum.

I want to see the rest of the bgs you've done (:

J. Wood said...

Hey Brandon,
It was nice seeing you. You've been doing some awesome work here, you have a great sense of perspective. Keep it up!

carl said...

Hey Brandon, I just wanted to stop by your blog and see what new work you were producing. Man, your backgrounds are getting better and better. I'm not sure how far fullerton is from pasadena, but I think you'd get a real kick out of some of the background/enviroment classes at the Concept Design Academy. If you have the money for the classes, I'd highly recommend taking the enviroment design class. Concept Design Academy
-carl
www.kidfrodo.com

Scott Lee said...

I'm feeling the clouds on the second version. Good work brutha!